Sins of the Father - Chapter 2: Special Investigations - The Pattern
"You look like hell," Chen said, setting coffees on his desk and propping a murder board against a stack of demonology texts.
Marcus had been awake for twenty-three hours straight, cross-referencing Enochian texts with Church archives and getting nowhere fast. The bourbon had run out around four in the morning, which meant he was sober and pissed off about it. His eyes burned like they'd been sandblasted. His head throbbed with the particular rhythm that came from too much caffeine and not enough sleep. Every muscle in his back reminded him that sleeping at your desk was a young man's game.
Thirty-eight. Not old by most standards. Ancient by the standards of people who investigated supernatural cases for a living. Most didn't make it past thirty-five—either they died, went insane, or got smart and found different careers. Marcus was stubbornly holding out for option three while flirting with option two.
Chen was dressed for work—sensible suit, hair pulled back, detective shield on her belt. Professional. Put together. Everything he wasn't.
"I live in a church basement and investigate supernatural murders for a living," he said, reaching for the coffee. Black, three sugars, exactly how he liked it. She remembered. Three years of irregular partnership, and she'd never forgotten. "Hell would be a step up. Better heating, more reliable company."
She almost smiled. Almost. Chen didn't smile much anymore—not since her partner died, not since she'd learned that vampires were real and could tear through a tactical team like tissue paper, not since she'd started calling Marcus for cases that didn't make sense. Sometimes he caught her hand drifting to her ribs—the place where the vampire's claws had raked her while Rodriguez bled out ten feet away. The scars had healed. Whatever was underneath them hadn't.
"I need you to look at something." The tone meant it was bad.
Marcus took a long swallow of coffee—still hot enough to burn, good—and gestured at the board. "Show me."
Chen flipped it around. Four faces stared back at him, crime scene photos pinned beside each one. Robert Cardelli, the real estate developer from last night, occupied the upper left. The other three Marcus didn't recognize, but they all had the same glazed-over look of the recently dead, and the same Enochian symbols carved into their chests.
INNOCENT. INNOCENT. INNOCENT.
"James Moretti," Chen said, tapping the second photo. "Fifty-one, owner of a trucking company. Found in an alley behind Our Lady of Sorrows in Bridgeport five days ago. Wife reported him missing after he didn't come home from confession."
She moved to the third photo. "David Hutchins, forty-eight, investment banker. Found in a dumpster near Holy Name Cathedral three days ago. According to his secretary, he'd been going to daily confession for a week before he disappeared."
The fourth photo. "And this is Marcus Wu, thirty-nine, restaurateur. Found yesterday morning in the parking lot of St. Thomas Aquinas in Lincoln Park. His boyfriend said he'd become obsessed with confession, going multiple times a day."
Marcus studied the photos, looking for the pattern beneath the pattern. Four men, different ages, different backgrounds, different parts of the city. But all professionals. All successful. All with something to lose.
"What connects them?"
"That's the thing." Chen pulled out a file folder, flipped it open. "On the surface, nothing. Different neighborhoods, different churches, different parishes. No shared business interests, no social overlap. But Marcus—"
She stopped herself. Her hand went to her ribs again, an unconscious gesture she probably didn't know she made. They both knew another Marcus—one who'd died three years ago in a vampire nest. Her partner. His friend. The reason she and Marcus had this arrangement in the first place. He'd seen the photos from that warehouse—Rodriguez torn apart, Chen bleeding out on concrete, three rounds from her service weapon buried in a creature that hadn't even slowed down. She'd spent six weeks in the hospital and refused the disability discharge they offered.
"But the pattern," she continued, her voice carefully neutral, "is in their confessions."
She pulled out screenshots from security footage, lined them up on his desk. Grainy black-and-white images of confession booths, timestamps in the corner.
"Most churches upgraded their security systems after that incident in Boston," she said. "Cameras everywhere now, including in the confession areas. They're supposed to be disabled during actual confessions, privacy laws and all. But St. Thomas had a malfunction. The camera stayed on."
She tapped one of the screenshots. "This is Marcus Wu, thirty minutes before the ME estimates his time of death."
Marcus leaned closer. The image showed a man kneeling in the confessional, head bowed, hands clasped. Nothing unusual. Except—
"Can you zoom in on his face?"
Chen pulled out her phone, brought up a clearer version. Wu's eyes were open but vacant, his mouth moving in words he didn't seem to be choosing. Not praying. Not even conscious of his surroundings.
"He's under influence." Marcus kept his voice flat, professional—the tone he'd learned to use when the world was going to hell and someone had to stay calm.
"That's what I thought." Chen pulled out another screenshot, from a different church. "This is James Moretti at Our Lady of Sorrows. Same expression, same posture. And listen to this—I pulled audio from St. Thomas."
She pressed play on her phone. A man's voice came through the speakers, thin and distorted but clear enough.
"Forgive me, Father, for I have sinned. I killed a man in 1997. Shot him in the head and dumped his body in the Chicago River. His name was Antonio Reyes. I did it for money, ten thousand dollars, paid by his business partner. I've never told anyone. I've never felt guilty. But I'm confessing now because I want absolution. I want to go to Heaven."
The recording stopped.
Marcus looked at Chen. "Wu said that?"
"According to the timestamp, yes. But here's the problem—Antonio Reyes is alive and well, running a restaurant in Pilsen. And Wu's financials show no connection to him, no ten thousand dollar payment, nothing. Wu was nineteen in 1997, working at his parents' restaurant for minimum wage."
"So he confessed to a crime he didn't commit."
"All of them did." Chen pulled out more files. "Moretti confessed to running a child trafficking ring. Hutchins confessed to embezzlement and fraud that bankrupted his own company. Cardelli—" She paused. "Cardelli confessed to murdering his wife twenty years ago. His wife is alive, divorced from him but very much breathing."
Marcus sat back. Four men, confessing to crimes they didn't commit, then dying with "innocent" carved into their chests.
"Someone's forcing them to confess."
"But why? What's the point?"
He turned to the bookshelf, scanning titles until he found what he needed. An old text, leather-bound and water-damaged, stolen from a Jesuit library in Rome. De Translatione Peccatorum. On the Transfer of Sins.
"There's a ritual," Marcus said, flipping pages until he found the right section. Medieval Latin, illustrated with woodcuts that would give children nightmares. "The Ritual of Transference. Banned by the Vatican in 1673 after a priest in Bavaria used it to transfer his sins to an innocent servant girl before dying."
Chen moved closer, reading over his shoulder. "What does it do?"
"Exactly what it sounds like. It allows someone to transfer their actual, literal, metaphysical sins to another person. The donor receives absolution, dies in a state of grace, goes straight to Heaven. The recipient..." He traced the illustration showing a man's soul being dragged down into flames. "The recipient gets damned in their place."
"That's not possible."
"Says the detective who's standing in a consecrated church basement looking at Enochian crime scene photos."
She conceded the point with a grimace. "Fine. Let's say it's possible. How does it work?"
Marcus read through the Latin, translating as he went. "You need three things. First, a willing confessor—someone who wants absolution but isn't genuinely repentant. Second, an innocent recipient—someone without the sins being transferred. And third, a conduit—someone who can perform the ritual and channel the transfer."
"The person carving the symbols."
"Yeah." He looked at the crime scene photos again. "But here's what doesn't make sense. The ritual requires the recipient to be truly innocent of the sins being transferred. These men weren't innocent—they were forced to confess to crimes they didn't commit. That should break the ritual."
"Unless whoever's doing this doesn't care about the rules."
"Everyone cares about the rules when it comes to Heaven and Hell. The cosmic order doesn't run on good intentions. It runs on contracts and technicalities and exact wording. That's why demons have lawyers."
Chen's phone buzzed. She glanced at it, and her expression went flat. "We've got another one."
Marcus was already grabbing his coat. "Where?"
"St. Monica's in Hyde Park. Female victim this time, mid-forties, found in the church garden. Same markings."
"Was she at confession?"
"Parish secretary says she was scheduled for confession with Father Rodriguez half an hour ago. He found her body when she didn't show up."
Marcus paused halfway to the door. "Wait. She was scheduled for confession but died before she could go?"
"Looks that way."
That changed things. All the other victims had been killed after confession, after the forced admission of sins they didn't commit. This one died before even entering the confessional.
"Someone's escalating."
"Or changing tactics." Chen was already heading for the stairs. "Either way, we need to get there before the scene gets contaminated. Father Rodriguez is old-school—he tried to perform last rites before calling 911."
They took Chen's sedan, racing through Chicago's morning traffic with the flashers on. Marcus used the time to pull up everything he could on his phone about the Ritual of Transference.
The texts were consistent: the ritual required a perfect transfer of sin from guilty to innocent. But what if someone had found a loophole? What if they'd figured out how to game the system?
"Talk to me," Chen said, weaving between cars on the Dan Ryan. "I can see you thinking."
"I'm wondering who would want to use this ritual. And why they'd target these specific people."
"You said the donor has to want absolution without being repentant."
"Right. Which means they're planning to die soon and want to ensure they go to Heaven despite their sins."
"So we're looking for someone terminal. Cancer, maybe. Or someone planning suicide."
"Maybe." But something about that didn't sit right. The hairs on the back of his neck had been standing up since the alley, and they hadn't settled. "Or someone who knows they're going to die for another reason."
Chen glanced at him. "Like what?"
"Like someone who's been marked for execution. By the Church, maybe. Or by something worse."
They pulled up to St. Monica's just as the ambulance was leaving. Crime scene tape already cordoned off the church garden, and uniforms kept the handful of curious onlookers at bay. Father Rodriguez sat on the church steps, rosary clutched in shaking hands, looking like he'd aged ten years in the last hour.
"Father." Chen approached him gently. "I'm Detective Chen. This is Marcus Kane, he's a consultant with the department."
Rodriguez looked up, and his eyes widened. "You're Marcus Kane. Jonathan's son."
Ice threaded down Marcus's spine. "You knew my father?"
"Knew him?" Rodriguez's laugh was bitter, broken. "I served with him for six years. We were partners before the Sword recruited him for the special operations unit. I was supposed to be on that 1987 mission too, but I had appendicitis." His hands tightened on the rosary until the knuckles went white. "Twenty-three years old and I thought God was punishing me for missing the operation. Took me a decade to realize He was saving me from it."
Rodriguez studied Marcus's face with an intensity that made his skin crawl—searching for Jonathan Kane in his features, finding enough to hurt.
"Jonathan was the best of us. Not just the skills, though he had those. The faith. He actually believed we were doing God's work, even when the work got dark." Rodriguez's voice dropped. "The last time I saw him, he told me the Church was wrong about the Nephilim. That they deserved redemption, not extermination. I thought he was having a crisis of conscience. Two weeks later, he was dead."
The words settled over Marcus like a second weight added to the one he already carried. His father—Jonathan Kane, Knight of the Sword of St. Michael—had died during the 1987 operation. The one that was supposed to stop heretics from using forbidden rituals. The one nobody in the Church wanted to talk about, and that Rodriguez had clearly spent decades trying to forget.
"Father Rodriguez," Chen said, drawing his attention back. "I need you to tell me everything that happened this morning."
Rodriguez nodded, gathering himself with visible effort. "Catherine Reeves. She's been coming here for three weeks, ever since she moved to the neighborhood. Very devout. Came to confession regularly. This morning she called and asked for an appointment, said it was urgent. When she didn't arrive at the appointed time, I went looking for her."
"And you found her in the garden?"
"Yes. She was..." He swallowed hard. "She was already gone. The marks on her chest showed through her torn clothing. I knew I shouldn't have, but I tried to give her last rites anyway." His hands trembled. "That's when it hit me."
"What hit you?"
Rodriguez looked at Marcus with something haunted in the deep lines of his face. "The absence of God. As if He'd turned His face away from her. As if she'd already been judged and found wanting."
Chen shot Marcus a look. He returned it with the slightest shake of his head—later.
Martinez was already working the scene. The victim—Catherine Reeves—lay on her back in the church garden, surrounded by winter-dead rose bushes. Same age range as the others, same professional appearance, same Enochian symbols carved into her chest.
INNOCENT.
But something was different. Marcus crouched beside the body, careful not to disturb the scene, and studied the symbols.
"These aren't identical to the others."
Chen knelt beside him. "What do you mean?"
He pointed to the third character in the sequence. "This one's different. Rotated slightly. It changes the meaning."
"To what?"
"Not just innocent. Proven innocent. Declared innocent. Innocent by decree."
"What's the difference?"
"Intent." He looked at the woman's face, peaceful despite the violence done to her body. "The others were marked as innocent—a claim that might or might not be true. This one is marked as innocent by judgment. By verdict."
"Someone's making a legal argument," Chen said slowly. "About her soul."
"Yeah. But arguing to who?"
His phone rang. Unknown number. Marcus answered anyway—you learned to take calls from strange numbers in his line of work.
"Mr. Kane." The voice was smooth, cultured, with an accent he couldn't quite place. British, maybe, or something older and less terrestrial. "I believe you're investigating a series of murders involving Enochian script and ritual transference."
Marcus stood, walking away from the crime scene. Chen followed, hand on her weapon. "Who is this?"
"Call me Brimstone. I'm an attorney with Morningstar, Babel & Associates. One of your victims—James Moretti—was my client. I'd like to hire you to find his killer."
"I don't work for demons."
"Everyone works for demons, Mr. Kane. We just make the terms explicit." The voice carried no malice—just the polished certainty of someone who'd been winning arguments since before humanity discovered fire. "And before you hang up, you should know that Moretti was a client in the most legal sense. He was seeking contract arbitration. Seems he made an agreement twenty years ago that he wanted dissolved."
The bottom dropped out of Marcus's stomach. "What kind of agreement?"
"The kind that ensures certain earthly successes in exchange for certain metaphysical concessions upon death. The kind that, if broken, would send his soul to my employer's domain regardless of his spiritual state at time of death."
"Moretti sold his soul."
"In crude terms, yes. But he found a loophole three months ago and came to me seeking representation. I was preparing his case when he died. His death invalidated our proceedings, but I'm curious about the manner of it. Very curious."
"Why?"
"Because according to the cosmic contract he signed, James Moretti's soul should have been collected the moment he died. But when we attempted collection, we found nothing. No soul, no residue, no trace. He simply... wasn't there."
Marcus looked back at the garden, at Catherine Reeves lying in the dead roses. "Someone took it first."
"Precisely. Someone is stealing souls that rightfully belong to my employer. That constitutes breach of cosmic law. I want them stopped, you want them caught. Our interests align."
"I don't make deals with demons."
"Then consider it a gift. I'll send you what I have on Moretti's contract—names, dates, specifics. No charge, no obligation. Though I do hope you'll remember this favor when you need legal representation of your own."
"I'm not going to need—"
"Everyone needs a lawyer eventually, Mr. Kane. Especially someone with your particular history. The St. Bernardine's case isn't as closed as you think."
The line went dead.
Marcus stood there, phone in hand, the February wind cutting through his coat. Brimstone—Senior Partner at one of the oldest infernal law firms in existence. His involvement meant this had just become something much larger than a murder case.
"Marcus?" Chen touched his arm. "What was that?"
"A demon lawyer telling me our killer is stealing souls that belong to Hell."
She processed that for exactly three seconds. "So we're dealing with someone who can override infernal contracts?"
"Looks that way."
"That's not possible."
"Add it to the list." He turned back toward the crime scene, his mind racing. "Chen, pull everything you can on the other victims. Financial records, contracts, anything they signed in the last twenty years. I want to know if they all had deals with Hell."
"And if they did?"
"Then our killer isn't just transferring sins. They're stealing souls from damnation and sending them to Heaven. They're not just breaking cosmic law—they're waging war against Hell itself."
Chen's jaw tightened. "Who would be crazy enough to do that?"
Father Rodriguez's reaction when he'd heard Marcus's name haunted the walk back to the car. His father—Jonathan Kane, Knight of the Sword of St. Michael—dead in 1987 during an operation against heretics using forbidden rituals. An operation nobody would discuss, records sealed, truth buried under decades of institutional silence.
"Someone with training," Marcus said. "Someone who knows how the system works well enough to exploit it. Someone who was taught by the Church."
"You think it's a priest?"
"I think it's someone who used to be." He looked one last time at the Enochian symbols carved into Catherine Reeves's chest. "And I think they're just getting started."
Behind them, Father Rodriguez prayed in Latin, the words of the rosary drifting across the garden like smoke. But even prayer couldn't change what Marcus had seen in the old priest's eyes.
Fear.
Not of what Marcus might do, but of what he represented.
The sins of the father, coming home to roost.
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